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Jan 25, 2008 22:50:38 GMT -5
Post by Night on Jan 25, 2008 22:50:38 GMT -5
I'm bored right now,so I'm gonna post a poem I wrote one night.Buizel's already read,and she liked it,the critic that she is...Anyways,I'd appreciate some feedback on it :3Disasters A columbine was once a flower And 9-11 just a day Those words now carry death Something has taken those definitions away Disaster That is the cause Disaster It makes everyday life pause Disaster The death,the pain,the tears Disaster You find it even among your peers Disaster How horrid it can be Disaster That we can all plainly see
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Jan 26, 2008 20:25:58 GMT -5
Post by Diamond on Jan 26, 2008 20:25:58 GMT -5
I do kinda like this poem^^. Although, I admitt...it does seem a bit morbid. But that is, perhaps, based on my personal tastes, no?
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Jan 27, 2008 9:43:26 GMT -5
Post by Buziel on Jan 27, 2008 9:43:26 GMT -5
I believe that it is supposed to be that way. Night's a depressed old granny vampire.
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Jan 27, 2008 12:20:33 GMT -5
Post by Night on Jan 27, 2008 12:20:33 GMT -5
Yeah,it is a tad depressing.I guess that's just my outlook on life XD
At least I'm not as depressed as Buizel
And I am not a granny vampire! -growls-
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Jan 27, 2008 15:44:00 GMT -5
Post by Buziel on Jan 27, 2008 15:44:00 GMT -5
You are and you know it.
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Jan 27, 2008 16:10:39 GMT -5
Post by Night on Jan 27, 2008 16:10:39 GMT -5
-huffs- Whatever....
-Bites Buizel with vampire fangs-
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Jan 27, 2008 20:46:51 GMT -5
Post by Diamond on Jan 27, 2008 20:46:51 GMT -5
Lol, wow...never heard of a granny vampire before. XD;
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Jan 27, 2008 20:59:53 GMT -5
Post by Night on Jan 27, 2008 20:59:53 GMT -5
I'm one of a kind X3
Buizel said I looked like a granny one day at school because of the jacket I wore and then called me a vampire 'cause my hands are always cold.
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Jan 28, 2008 8:48:41 GMT -5
Post by Buziel on Jan 28, 2008 8:48:41 GMT -5
Which only proves my point.
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Jan 28, 2008 18:30:06 GMT -5
Post by Diamond on Jan 28, 2008 18:30:06 GMT -5
Lol X3
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Jan 29, 2008 20:58:50 GMT -5
Post by Buziel on Jan 29, 2008 20:58:50 GMT -5
Oh, I'm sorry, you're not a granny vampire.
You're a spazzing granny vampire. -snickers-
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